https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WubC0g-VPuI&feature=youtu.be
Above is the link for my elevator pitch number 2.
What I changed or tried to improve based upon my feedback was to be more animated and show a little more emotion. Its not a nice topic so you cant really smile or be happy and I don't really want to freak anybody out and scare them so it has to be a little contained.
Hi Scott;
ReplyDeleteUnfortunately, I was not able to see your elevator pitch video with the link you provided. Thus, for the future, I would proofread the post to make sure to include a link that directs us to your video. Nevertheless, reflecting on what you say in your post, I believe it is great that you were able to improve and change based on the feedback you got on your first pitch. Go Gators!
Thank you Isadora, I watched mine and it opens for me but I think that is because it recognizes my computer. I changed the setting back to unlisted again so I think it should be viewable again.
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